this week i have been working on the show

Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hey Taine, nice work! You have picked some great words to describe Cirque du Soleil. One of my favourite words you have written is brave because you're right, some of the amazing things they do and how high they go definitely takes a lot of bravery. Keep up the great work. Caitlin :)
ReplyDeleteHey Taine, I think that if you added a bit more detail to your blog post your readers would be able to understand more of what you have posted about. The video is not linked to the post, and so perhaps you could explain what Cirque du Soleil is, what they do and describe it a little bit. You may also suggest the other videos for you audience to watch. The words you have used in your cloud art certainly would entice people to watch it!
ReplyDeleteMrs D :o)